Animation: Processes and Production - Line Test 2 (OUAN405)

Here is another line test of my animation, this time however the animation is rendered in pen & ink.
I have noticed that there are a few points in the animation that could do with extra frames to smooth them out, for example when the frame crops down to the eye and switches to the sword being swung at the fly - that whole sequence - I feel needs a series of whole frames blacked out in ink to smooth out the transition. There are other points in the animation that need improvement, but these points could be something to focus on in the pre-production phase.